Hello again! I was just sitting here thinking that since you are all readers and all writers...I'd like to know what you would change about any of the books. Would you change the endings? Give the animals names? Change any of the plots? Give them new titles?
I'd love to know what you think.
Best,
Doreen
Dear Doreen,
ReplyDeleteWe are so excited about your questions! Here are our ideas!
Lily: "Instead of Thump, Quack, Moo, I would call the book Corn Festival!"
Ellie: "I would call the animals in Giggle, Giggle, Quack Brownie, Sugar, Ginger, and Cinnamon - all baking words!"
Claire: "You could call the pig in Dooby Dooby Moo SLEEPY because he sleeps so much."
Nikki: "The title should be BOUNCY and not just BOUNCE!"
Raabiah: "For Giggle Giggle Quack, you could change the title to - All the Animals Make Noise!"
Claire: "If I changed the ending of Dooby Dooby Moo, I would make the animals still at the fair."
Lily: "In Diary of a Spider, I would make Grampa come home tomorrow."
Thanks for the questions and reading our ideas!
Love,
Your First Grade Friends
I would give the animals names: I would name the duck Quacky and the cows Moooooo. I would also name the pig Dirtyboy and his last name would be Pig.
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In Duck for President, I want to change the story. I want the governor to win because ducks can't be presidents.
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Michael